wow funny to find you here

Damn way way way way way wyayayywyaqywayaywaywy better!!! sounds so professional too transions beatifully and the reverb/ speaker jumping makes it sounds so sick. but i still dont think it sounds completelly done. sorry to burst your bubble, but even after a full day of working its still almost imppossible to finish a song. first off that bass you added doesnt pull the song through it sounds like more background ambiance, not heavy or hard hitting. also try to spice up the drums a bit. depending on what program you use theres a way to side chain {side chaining is when the background ambiance is triggered by your bass to drop instantly and spike back up giving the song a trance like feel i say this might be a good idea because the drum pattern is very trance}. i can teach you how if you use Fl. also your musical scores are pretty nice but get som what repetative. i really dont like telling you tyhis for two reasons, first off these are just my opinions second is cause i know that this is the last thing you want to hear after a full day of making music. but its all for good cause because if zellers hadnt did the same for me i would have gotten nowhere. the again he only did that for me cause he thought i had talent, thats why im doing it with you. so keep up the good work. Gold Star! p.s. phew that must have been the longest comment i ever typed.