Overall is ok, It's need more drums or more bass
Keep it up :3
PS. Welcome to Asia, Thailand
not to shabbeH XD could use a lil more beats or drums, the melody was catchy though, overall it wasnt so bad =] keep it up~!
thanks, yeah I'm still working on the beats, lol. I'm not too good with them so far, if anyone wants a collab :P that'd be cool haha. Thanks for the great review and I'll work hard on those beats for ya