You have to finish this..
my problem is that in certain parts of the song, the notes clash. Some things are off-key. I would point them out to you directly but I'm too lazy...=/
Also, you could also turn down the pad a bit. It's really raspy and it drowns out some of the more interesting songs you have in the piece.
Nice job dude!
If this is ever lengthened, altered, or whatever, PM me, I would love to hear it.
cmon man! let us into your head! what were thinkin when u wrote this song?
pretty cool, i would almost put this under rock... and im positive u could complete this into a full song, with lyrics even. COOL.
fkin love the bass line!