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this song was fun to make....one of my early attempts...i'm finding all this older shit on my computer that i'm happy to hear once again. please take the take to listen and review!

2:30-ish is my favorite spot in this song.

i could really use any criticism, help, or ideas! thanks so much!


Raw Talent, I See!

For an early attempt, this is an excellent and original piece. The beat and melody are well blended, and it actually holds your interest while you listen to it. You certainly have some talent for this kind of thing, and I would love to hear more of your work.

5 of 5, 10 of 10
Opinion: You've earned a fan: Me!

zomgkerrie responds:

wow! i think your review was a great xmas present haha! thanks so much for taking the time to listen! i love to do music, even though i haven't much time anymore! it means so much that you were a fan, and i would love it if you were able to give me some pointers on some of my other stuff when you have the chance! thanks for stopping by and merry christmas! <3 Kerrie

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Anyways 1:43 loved the beat right there!
Do love the transition at 2:30 as well tho
I think I would love this even more with a heavier beat but beats are never heavy enough for me unless its like rave stuff so pay no thot to that lol.
At times it reminded me of....noone sounds really original to me :) GJ!


zomgkerrie responds:

yay! 2:30 is my favorite spot too in this song. im weak in my percussion choices, so yes, i need to work on making things sound heavier. i agree that would have made this better. lol, i'm glad i'm original in my songs lol! thanks so much for the listens and reviews!

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4.27 / 5.00

Sep 2, 2008
3:08 PM EDT
File Info
4.9 MB
5 min 21 sec

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