the cosmos

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just finding songs off my drive...
i know the "let the music plaaaayyyy" part is ghey.....

0:40 and around 1:11 are my favorite parts of this song...one of my first attempts....please review! would love to hear and improve and get inspired! if it sucks, don't be afraid to tell me.thanks so much!



Pretty cool.
Love how it sounds.
I love the little parts where you harmonized I think you should do more of that =D
And i dont think the "Let the music play parts where ghey justcould have been placed a slight bit better GJ yet again :)
I also Happend to like the screaching sound fit in my ears.
Harmonize moar plox!!!

Phew fingers are getting tired

zomgkerrie responds:

yes, harmony ftw! yayayay you like the screeching! i thought it added a new twist on the song. i will work more on that, i think that is a big key into helping my songs sound fuller! thanks again! ZOMGNOMOARTIREDFINGERSZ!!!

I can see space, and...

I could feel the idea that you had, although the screeching sound felt a bit out of place to me. It does give a dystopian feeling, which is great if that's what you were going after. Also, some deep base in many parts would give the song a more full feeling and texture that I think is awesome.

Keep experimenting with this one; I see great potential in it!


zomgkerrie responds:

lol thank you! i guess with the screeching sound, i was really going for a mix between light and pretty, and just raw and gritty. i loved the extremes those two elements brought to the table. i really love the cellos i had thrown in there. thanks for the listen and review my lovely penguin!


got goosebumps. i loved it. its epic. great work and by the way if you dont think something sounds good dont use it.

zomgkerrie responds:

thanks so much! the only thing is my drive went bad and all i have is a quickly rendered mp3 of this song, and not the actual acidpro file, so i can't go back and change it. i wish i could do more with the song. it would take trying to hunt down those loops again and rebuilding the song from the ground up. that would be crazy. lol. i'm glad you liked it and took the time to review! no one had said anything yet, i thought it sucked *sad face* lol.

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4.27 / 5.00

Sep 2, 2008
2:55 PM EDT
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3.1 MB
2 min 41 sec

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