Well here is another song which I thought up a very long time ago, one of my first songs I think. It has developed so many times, and I will keep developing it still. I know it's not great quality on the voices but I have provided 'translations' below ^_^ I will add a better version when I have more time to work on it, I just wanted to see what people thought of this first attempt. Listen to it all and let me know what you think ^_^ thanks.
Dialogue:
Guy 1 - Awwwh man shit, are we ever gonna get out of here?
Guy 2 - I dunno just keep walking... let's play...
Guy 3 - Yeh Dawg
Creature - *Creepy Laughter*
Guy 3 - Holy Shit!
Guy 1 - Oh my God, who is that?!
Creature - It's a' me... I liked cheese
Guy 2 - Oh my God it's something in the road
Guy 3 - Did he say cheese?
Guy 2 - We gotta play, make it disappear quickly!
Guy 3 - Whoa whoa whoa, I ain't into that shit... that kinda shit boy
Creature - You going to play me cinnamon *heee*
Guy 3 - Cinnamon? Did he say something about cinnamon?!
Edit: Aw come on guys, if it is that bad at least let me know what I can do to improve it?! eh eh ^_^
Cinamon Creature is he tasty?
Why does the cinamon creature like cheese? it's sounds liek it would be for a part in a trailer. The thing i mostly picked up on was the change in chords and how the the backing changed in the opposite mostly ! very soothing though i think the ammount of layers in some parts can overwhelm you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
neojim88 
