Woah... It wasn't badly composed or anything... but... here are some things
-1 it had an odd sense to it... made you feel a little disturbed... so that could be a good or bad thing depending on the mood you're in. I think you can tell what mood I'm in =P
-1 It made some weird changes, it wasn't very melodic at times
-1 It seemed that it could never stay in one place at a time.
So thats my run down on it... if I rate anything a 6 or below I usually leave reasons why... but I just felt this one needed it.
yeah i guess your right. i put in a loop from doom 1 in it, can you hear it?