sounds. . . bad
it has potential, but the fact that it sounds like I'm playing it through blown speakers doesn't help at all.
Can you tell me how to fix it?
its great in many ways, but something sucks
the lack of compression on your channels makes it sound so terrible in general.
the melody is great, the transitions are great, the bpm is suitable, the sounds would be excellent if they were compressed.
the breaking up/ stuttering may be intentional, but in my opinion it's not suitable.
work on it, it would make a very nice entry.