Well this is interesting...
I gotta admit, I can kinda get into this. I wouldn't mind of hearing more changes to the original since it was done like this, but it plays out well all the same.
Keep it up.
Well as I'm starting to slip in the music I make, if you tell me what'd sound better to add, or get rid of then I'll be happy to try it out because what is most important to me is how the people that listen to my music feel about how it sounds.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.