just add emphasis
You really have some good ideas in this song! Some parts didn't seem as intense as they could have been. Everything else really seems to blends together well. Awesome stuff.
Cool, but needs a stronger impact
You have some REALLY awesome parts in the song that seem to build up and up and then just go nowhere.
For example right at the beginning of the song, it feels like it should build up and finish with maybe a stronger kick and bass at around 0:30.
You have the atmosphere and mood down really well, it's great. But you should work on producing a bit more, add some more bass or a stronger kick. It's as if you're creating all this excitement (especially at around 1:30) that leads to nothing.
Overall, rad song.
Try a different lead
The synth in the intro threw me off. Otherwise the rest of the song is amazing. :3
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