As with the other song I commented on...
You need to bring your production standard up. Also why are you recording an electric guitar with a mic? You should pug it directly into the recording software. Purchase a Line 6 TonePort, and you'll get Gearbox with it for free. If your gonna be making songs with guitars in, it's definately worth the money.
ive tried that it didnt work. thats a good idea though well thnx for the reveiw
Man, you really have to work on that production job of yours, as it sounds very harsh, with all the clipping and hissing going on
The guitar itself is nice though and I hope you can develop this one into a decent song. The main riff sounds like a more melodic and rock-ish version of Nargaroth, I like that.
Keep working on it and make it longer and don't forget the mixing! :)
yah my mic that i was recording with sucked. thanks for the reveiw!