Quite the beautiful piano line and I love the saws too
I like it!
It's really good, the original track is nice for one thing...
And what you've done to it works out quite nicely.
It's rather short, but i think you've done a really good job of holding true to (what sounds like the original) and adding a pretty sweet, kind of retro techno beat to the mix.
The melodies blend quite well..
Everything here sounds really high quality, especially for not using any presets. I didn't listen to the original, but what you've presented here is really good. There's a lot of subtlety to the automation work you do here, and I think it works really well.
if you're looking for drum samples and stuff...
try freesound.com. i've found a lot of good, useable stuff there... just don't forget your signon ID once you get it, its a hell of a chore to get it back!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.