You told me you would PM me!:O
I like the beginning :D Nice intro! It gets a bit long once the drums come in though.. Good job in it however! Hmm it gets a bit monotonous when you hear it for.. 1:30 hahaha, but that is ok:) I love it how that psytrancy feeling goes through your whole track! Oh dang. :( The melody still overpowers the beat. I told you to change it ! >.<
Lol, don't listen to me rambling. Your song misses a bit of bass though.. Not that anything is wrong with it.. But the bass lacks oomph. If you use FL Studio, try EQ'ing and Bass Boosting it:) The percussion through the whole song is good, around 5:40 the drums sound abit marchy hahaha. The melody is ok, and although it does overpower the beat, it fits nicely to the rest of the song.
Outro is good, and I don't really have anything more to mention on this track, and I guess that concludes my review. All in all, I think you have done a very good job on this track, and I will definetely look forward to hearing tracks from you!
Keep it up;)