This is a good and catchy song!
I like it but the lead is a bit loud just like Maltloaf said.
Under that all the song is very good!
P.S. - Could you please review my song "Beat Tha Osc"? It is on the portal now. Thanks!
The lead is too insistent, and the short loop doesnt help it any. Remember that outside is where people will spend a good deal of their time, so a short, loud loop gets annoying quickly. See the gold saucer for an example.
You'd probably be better off with a slower track or an ambient track for 'outside', and use this as a quick and dirty loop for motion cutscenes, where it's not likely to loop more than once.
Speaking of loops, the rythem loops perfectly, but the strings feel like they're cut prematurely. I keep runnign into that myself, haven't found an answer yet. :/
Thanks for your input. The loop isn't exactly right, simply because the song is actually a MOD, so it loops to a different point in-game. Unfortunately, you can't do that with an mp3. Oh how I would love it if you could. I agree with you that the lead is a bit too loud. I'll change that soon enough. As for your comment that it's not appropriate for an outdoor track, I have two answers. One is that the game is similar to Cave Story, in that there are several distinct "areas". There may end up being more than one outdoor area, but this will only be used for one. My second answer is that I am attempting to model the game's music off of Cave Story, in that the music is of an "active" style at all times aside from cutscenes, and Metroid, in that it is somewhat, if not totally, unconventional. Also keep in mind that this is merely a beta, and that this song in particular will most likely be expanded, perhaps another 30 seconds or so.
Maybe this song shouldn't be listed as a loop, because the loop is not exactly what it is "supposed" to be. At any rate, thank you for your response, and it will sound better eventually. :P
haha that intro i laughed but the other was okay
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.