The beginning your delivery sounds wierd as shit. Like you strained to release some of the words, an d sound funny as hell like in the T-Pain bar. Some of the lines were weak hell too. The government line could've been touched up more, and you seem to use mostly similes. Either way, I 5'd ya. Overall, good track.
aint nothing strong here man just fucking around n***a how cha been
this the shit my nig
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