nice Sytrus preset!
No offence dude... but this 'song' is in no way worthy of posting.
For starters: the gated synth... and that's all. You have no other elements in the loop. add some pads or a lead to make it better. and a '4-on-tha-floor' percussion setup, like traditional techno sound
ehhh... i'll keep an eye on you cuz i have a feeling you will become really good some day.