can be improved by putting more of a drum in there and maybe some lighter notes on the guitar with some extra riff and maybe not so much bass
The 2 other reviews written before mine are true.
Cut out the metronome, it serves no purpose in a completed track. Don't use General MIDI patches. Even basic programs like GarageBand and even to a degree Fruity Loops have decent patches, but I suggest upping to Reason or Logic Pro for real sounds not garbage.
This is not call and response at all, as the response is an answer to the call, not the exact same thing on a different instrument. Listen to some jazz bands on YouTube for how to really do it.
Add a real hook and not generic chord thumping, this is incredibly bland, boring, cliched and overall awful, it's simply put just a wall of annoying noise, horrible patches and exceptionally weak composition.
maybe u should try making good songs
lik 1st off make it longer
2n off make it more interesting O_o
3rd off have some sort of singing weather human or animatronic