this is pretty damn nice
was just looking through your titles, this caught my attention. And damn its nice. Though i had to lol at 9 rates, 45 downloads lol. youd think a few would put in the extra effort to click a rating. anyway ma, this is effin nice. What program is this that youre using?
I didn't think a Beautiful Nightmare was possible, but this track pretty much expresses. The opening riff sounds a lot like "One" but manages to add a serene feel to it, which is pretty amazing. Gives me the feeling that I'm off exploring somewhere. The instruments could be a bit better, but otherwise great.
Good concept, but missing variation.
When I started listening, I really enjoyed this song. However, the song doesn't add much variation, and that is where it lacks.
If I were to improve this song, I would keep the first 55 seconds the way they are, but at 0:55, I would add a heavy undertone, perhaps a fat drop-c electric guitar chord, which I would keep through the early 1:00 area instead of the low notes you have. A deep growling guitar chord would fix many of your variation problems.
I like your rhythm work in general, especially the section that starts at 1:33.
Thanks a lot for the tips. I'll definitely keep them in mind for my next projects.
Wow. Truely awesome. Same problem as you... for this song I think of a lot of things.... I can't think of one name for it. Here are a few words/themes that popped into my head: lost, adventure, travel, new, change
Woah, that's pretty crazy because the one word that caught my mind was 'journey'. As luck would have it, I thought up of Beautiful Nightmare. (although it turns out someone else has a song that uses that title already) =(
But I do thank you for the review and the naming ideas! =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.