Pleasure-Gently Touched Flower

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A rap song me and friend are working on the vocal tracks are still being tweaked but tell me what you think
Lyrics :
(verse 1)
just try walking a day in my life
and see what its like to live in strife
it seemed like you left me just in spite
just because of that special night

What you did dont make it right
Our love strong high like a kite
Our love was true like a bird in flight
Until that day we had a fight

You'll be back ill just beleive
Beleiving is know what you cant
Release these shackles off of me
Baby Please! Baby Please!

I know the good things in life aint free
Im locked up girl you got the key
Im losing hope of why to be
You took the pleasure of life from me
We can make things better,If she goes dont let her,Never let her,Ill go and get her
You can be my treasure,We can be together forever and I'll(I'll give you pleasure)
Verse 2
Here we go again The same routine again
but nothing has changed we all stayed the same when you put love before life
The water starts to flow the current seems to show
How we all change but all stay strange but i cant comprehend
But now im all alone back in the room where it began
and all i see is me without you and i begin to flow
Here i am start the show lets go back to the way things were
Now i know i need my self just as much as i need her
The light begins to shine in my eyes For the last time
Im Still Alive
Soo take it all away from life all our lies


lol its cool, just need to work on ya rappin flow

yo.. for starters... to the dude under me.. RnB is not always romance.. i could of sworn it was rythm and blues.... i dont see love or romance in there..... so before u start tellin people to do things.. make sure ur right cause then u look like an ass and make people like me reply...

to the actual song dudes.. its cool, it just reminds me of Yoink.. but i like yoink cause hes Thug ;D keep ya shiz up lolz

He does recognize that R&B is romance rite?

Fix the category dude cuz its in the wrong one.
Other wise, its pretty good.

bobbyhill23 responds:

? i dont get what you mean what category would you suggest there is none for rap on newgrounds

Its pretty good.

you can barely hear the words through the beat at the begining and if you would put up the lyrics that'd be cool.

This is great

The singer sounds like eminem lol

Very well done!

Good job guys, nice song

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4.26 / 5.00

Aug 20, 2008
12:35 AM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
2.3 MB
2 min 29 sec

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