you had a pretty decent intro going on :) goood job on that. once the first background staccato synth established its melody, dont forget to make it vary as the song goes on.
the synth melody that came in was good. try adding a strong compressor on it to make it snappy [pm me if u dont kno how.]
the bass drum is wonderful! just make sure that it its actually in tempo--it seemed kinda off kilter. and the bassline was pretty decent.
something about the song made it sound really muddy, its probably the style of the bass drum, but i like that drum, so idk what you should do about that--maybe single out the dominant frequencies of ur bass drum and eq out everything else, or layer it with a trebly bass drum to make it more textured? i think it might help with the mix.
hehe, this sounded not so finished, so if u ever expand this, gimme a pm... i wanna hear :) hope i helped, this isnt very cliched trance and it sounds great. go for ittt
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