Intenste kick, and melody!
Hmm, well to start of, I am not quite impressed by the intro of this song. You could do some more, but I liked the claps combined with the bass. Anyways, I love your kick, and the bass sounds fine.. do not feel irritated by that little boy beneath me.
Structure of this song is good, however those snare rolls ruined it for me Example:(1:54). They where too long, and not well placed in my oppinion. Anyways a tip here, instead of letting the snare roll for like 8 seconds or so, try to lower that to 4 seconds maximal. And also do not let it roll on the same speed, increase it at 2 seconds, and last ultimate speed at 3 seconds.
Overall a good song though, the melody is very unique, only too short.
5/5 8/10 <- 8/10 for the flaws as described above. Do not think I disliked this song, I mostly give reviews with critism, there where certainly good points in this song as well. those are the things/instruments wich I didn't reckon in this review. Keep it up you got potential!