It was pretty good throughout the entire song, but the ending just sounded really out of place. It really sounds like you should of continued along with it instead of having it end there. That noise that is at the end just makes it sound like it ends abruptly. Not too bad though. It could use a bit of variety here and there. Maybe just one more instrument would of made it, but it would still be fine without the extra instrument.
And again, I'm fairly new to this. I'll add a bit more next time. Thanks for the review.