voted 4

There was something about this song that was keeping it from being a 5 and 10/10.

First off: The melody was good, but nothing to go crazy about. The drums were telling me to go crazy, but the melody didn't deliver.
The claps kind of pushed me away. I didn't like the way they sounded. They were too generic and threw off the song a little.
The rest of the song was pretty good. You had a good overall feel, but there were some sounds clashing.
You should also make this longer. There really wasn't too too much for me to review.
Overall decent song, needs some work, but still pretty good none-the-less.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest track "Love the DJ"

Not bad

Lol, who so short? :(. Okay, let's get to it.

First off, your melody is good but, it doesn't grab my attention. It's hardly something that people will be humming and it won't be something that will make someone listen to the song more than once. If I were you, I'd work on making that melody alot more epic and memorable so when someone hears it, all they can say is "Wow". The glistle saw in the background is out of time to me and screws up the whole song to me. Please, get rid of it.

I like your bass but there are parts where it just desn't work for me. Like 0:16. It just sounds jumbled. I'd turn it downaswell and up the low bass freq'. From what I'm hearing in my head, it would sound alot better.

As for the drums. The kick isn't bad. Nice and hard. Clap needs to be louder and the hihat needs EQing' aswell as treble reduction. The snare at the start would sound mad with a little pitch automation just on the last bar aswell. You crashes have a bit too much treble aswell.

I like the composition but there are parts where the song doesn't have enough power. For instance, the break into the verse at 0:15. It's not powerful enough to match the anticipation that the build up gave and it really lets the listener down.

Well, that's it for me. Hopefully this will help the final product and I wish you the best of luck for it.

good job here

all you guys have so good songs