This loop seems pretty good-- As an ambient piece I think it grabs too much attention albeit the sound isn't bad. One of the things that took me out of it the most was the drums, they seemed cut away from the strings in the beginning, like two songs had been spliced together.
The fade in/fade out loop style is sort of a cop out (I think) for actually making the music continuous.
Cerri - thanks for the feed back....it's a work in progress...
est1913 - I appreciate the comment and compliment. I will take the fading and panning into consideration when making further tracks.