Your bass is pretty nice, but the textures in the song need to be fatter and richer. Right now you have a bangin beat + bass with subdued synths. Just doesn't sound right.
Yah I made this song in a day so I hate to say it but it wasn't completely digitally remastered.
It's missing that little edge
Usually in Rave music, there is at least one heavily filtered pack or preset. This is what you're missing. Also, the bass needs more bass.
Its getting there
I like the drum work. A little uniqueness. I dont see that very often here. The song itself kind of felt empty. Its missing something. It feels dry. The melodies are nice and all but they dont seem well-transitioned at all. I see you getting where you want to be one day though. Just keep on making music. =D
I voted a 5 on your song i think is unfair the score your getting. This song is good.
Thnk you mysterious one.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.