Ill give you some constructive criticizim. In the beginning, it didnt flow so well because you were trying to mix the main beat with a high pitched tone. The main beat was low pitched and the beat didnt blend with the high pitched tone so, that didnt go well. The rest of the song went smoothly enough, but if the beginning isnt that great, most ppl will just click away before listening to the whole song. I thought Xuitar was a great song though (thats your other song right?). This kindof felt like a step-down compared to your other song.
Again, this was just constructive criticizim.
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