In The Gears

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This might actually be okay. For the first time, people on IM actually liked something...

200 BPM. Needs a bit more work done. I NEED to find better drums. I kind of thought it sounded like rubbing the members of Freezepop on a glass door when I was done, and someone else thought it was like Venetian Snares (That's what I was originally going for).

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Allow me to rephrase what others said. :P

While the drums are abundant, they don't really stand out. Also, work on either some glitchy effects or some more luxuriant melodies. I know that sounds like a weak criticism, but there are a variety of resources online about music theory, including how melodies work. Keep at it, though, csd. CHAAAAAWKLIT RAYYYYNE!

csdthegreat responds:

Three 7s! I must be lucky! I WISH I could do glitchy effects and the like, but GB can only do so much... or, I can only do so much with what I've learned. I've been messing around in GB every day... I'll figure something out eventually...


Needs a little more going on in the background, plus some variety in the drums. also needs more variety in the melody, because it just seemed a little repetitive, and way too low.


It's needs a bit more. It lacks the driving intensity. Get some really powerful synths in there, and make the drums more interesting.

You can definitely make it better.

csdthegreat responds:

My thoughts exactly.

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Aug 14, 2008
9:51 PM EDT
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1.7 MB
1 min 55 sec

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