Allow me to rephrase what others said. :P
While the drums are abundant, they don't really stand out. Also, work on either some glitchy effects or some more luxuriant melodies. I know that sounds like a weak criticism, but there are a variety of resources online about music theory, including how melodies work. Keep at it, though, csd. CHAAAAAWKLIT RAYYYYNE!
Three 7s! I must be lucky! I WISH I could do glitchy effects and the like, but GB can only do so much... or, I can only do so much with what I've learned. I've been messing around in GB every day... I'll figure something out eventually...
Needs a little more going on in the background, plus some variety in the drums. also needs more variety in the melody, because it just seemed a little repetitive, and way too low.
It's needs a bit more. It lacks the driving intensity. Get some really powerful synths in there, and make the drums more interesting.
You can definitely make it better.
My thoughts exactly.