I don't know about you, but I believe this version is much better than the first version I made. I've yet to soften some soundwaves, so it gets a bit clippy, I'll fix that problem soon. Since reptitiveness is my weakness, I decided to make a roughly 2 minute beginning, then the rest of the song a build up, with a quiet and soft ending. This song style and sound is much different than that of Luminary. I hopw you enjoy this song as much as I do. Don't forget to review, but please don;t say anything about the clippyness, since I'm fixing that already, thanks.
EDIT: I fixed it, it's much better now, not so clippy now. I softened alot of synths.