You sounded like a 3 year old with phlegm in his throat. You cannot make Heavy Metal, you're trying to deepen your voice, which isn't working. I honestly think you should stop music, but if you like it, you like it.
I like the instrumental work.
This was a while ago. My voice has some more depth now.
i dont really like heavy metal but this was..........AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
Thanks! I love it when people like my music!