Intro is way too long
You need a drum beat and a bass line of some sort. The solo is pretty great, but the riff gets a bit annoying. I kept expecting a drum fill. Serious potential though, you got some chops!
yo...thanks for the advice..ill keep it in mind.
i actually just finished mixing the bass in today but the drums might take a while
my drum synth is on my old computer and .....well....thats gone..so if you have any programs you could suggest im open....thanks ..