You had that minimal going at like 5:42 - 5:44 and I was digging it. That's what the whole fucking song should be. You definitely should get rid of that cymbal or whatever that is comes in around 0:40. Add in some more glitchy-er sounds or hats maybe. Once again, you have to lock into that groove or flow, which this song lacks. You did make a nice bass though I'll give you props on that. Keep in mind if you are wanting to produce true minimal, you should cut down on those sounds playing all at once. And once again you need to work on better breakdowns. Also, decide whether you are trying to produce minimal or tech house please, because the bass is sounding tech-y.