I fell of the Swing like an average guy

I also have anal bum syndrome

ok sorry

the beat is good but the lyrics suck

If I was able to...

... make a flash for this i would have done it immidatly ;p.
Sadly... I am on NG for the AP... ;).
Still, the idea is quiet funny, would be wonderfull if you would record it a bit more properly.

Simply Stunning..

I loved the lyrics, and the beat that comes in at :40 is a great mix of things. The story you tell here is very descriptive. I really felt your pain.

There really is no way to improve this piece. You seem to have mastered the art of rap and story-telling in musical form.

I hope you decide to make more music in the future, I laughed at this and thought that you did a magnificent job!

-X-

ummm...

music was kinda good, but the singing was dumb.