I fell of the Swing like an average guy
I also have anal bum syndrome
the beat is good but the lyrics suck
If I was able to...
... make a flash for this i would have done it immidatly ;p.
Sadly... I am on NG for the AP... ;).
Still, the idea is quiet funny, would be wonderfull if you would record it a bit more properly.
I loved the lyrics, and the beat that comes in at :40 is a great mix of things. The story you tell here is very descriptive. I really felt your pain.
There really is no way to improve this piece. You seem to have mastered the art of rap and story-telling in musical form.
I hope you decide to make more music in the future, I laughed at this and thought that you did a magnificent job!
music was kinda good, but the singing was dumb.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.