its was good...
until it got to the piano part... it seemed way off key and horrid at that point but the rest of it sucked me up in your story for it
Ekura, a once innocent soul, stood for all that was good.
He was a great mage, once using his power to lessen the forces of Maluu.
He tries to dispose of them, though try he may, 'tis only a matter of time before he becomes one of them. A demon puts a dark, glowing liquid in a glass and tempts him to drink it. He attempts to resist drinking it but alas, his efforts are in vain as he gulps it down thirstily.
The foul, bitter liquid turns him to the dark forever more.
His treason will cost him his life...
This is my attempt at a different genre.
It is supposed to be a theme for one of my characters, Ekura Iuren.
The paragraph above is just something about him. Just something to read while you listen.
Well, I like this song. Nice and dark.
Enjoy!
-Alan
P.S.: Is there anything I can improve on? Let me know. Constructive criticism, please!
Edit: 'Twas my intention on making the piano off a little. If you think it is way too off, tell me.
its was good...
until it got to the piano part... it seemed way off key and horrid at that point but the rest of it sucked me up in your story for it
Oh.
Heh...
I was quite intent on making the piano off a little.
I guess I overdid it?
Ah well.
Glad you liked it at the least.
-Alan
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.