Lovely, and relatable.
The music matched exactly what you described for it to do, and that's not always easy with music.
I love your instrumentals, they work well with each other. And with a bit more balancing with the different parts, as JoeyKeys said, that could become a masterpiece of a song. Well, in my opinion anyway.
Keep up your great work; I wish mine came out as good as yours did =).
Thanks very much :)
You need to equalize a lot of it.
Somethings are way to loud and mix with eachother to much.
And theres this compressed sound.
Thanks, at last a non-spam comment :P