well done sir
i noticed u asked for suggestion and feedback so here goes:
this piece definatly gave the image of a chinese rural area, so the imagery you used was spectacular. the instrument choice couldve been worked on a bit to reflect more of an oriental feel, and i realize this may have been more of the writing programs fault than yours, but parts such as :30-:42 didnt really seem to sound too pretty from the slow violin sound. the cello soli around 1:35 didnt really seam to sound pleasing at all to be honest. u definatly did do well with a pentatonic scale, as its often hard to make the transition for alot of composers to go from western to oriental music