That guy is a douche. I just looked at his other reviews. I 5'd this to make it 2.87 / 5.00 (+ 2.87) . Alright, now here's my review.
I think it's a very good start. It seems to be lacking tension though. There's no real buildup and release. It's very flat the entire time. Also, like RandomAnnoyance said, the lead synth is a bit loud. Turn it down so it doesn't overpower all of the other instruments.
Thanks for reviewing, its always good to hear what my listeners have to say,
Firstly, i would have to agree with you, when you say that guy is a douche,
Because he really truely is, llol. But i dont care what people say about my music,
if its not helpful, its ignored. Secondly, I do need abuild up before the kick starts.
Maybe ill add a pad back there that phases from quiet to loud, and morphs into
the basspad thats backing up the main lead. It would sound so much better. I will also make the lead a little quieter as it is quite loud. Thanks again for reviewing, as it is most appreciated.
I'll be the first to say great
Synth is a bit too loud but the melody is great. You could have more of a background tho. the melody is kinda prominent and could be dubbed down a bit to bring in a second theme.
Good job tho : )
Oh and the guy that reviewed above me is a dick. he fails at living and knowing good music :)
Thanks for reviewing, I agree when you say the synth is a bit loud,
Im planning on fixing it up a little. Also, i agree it should have something
more in the background, maybe a pad or something, and i could make a second
synth to extend the loop, and make it a full on song. Thanks for voting.
And i agree, He fails at life. =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.