Not bad. But it sounds like it still needs a little refinement, it doesn't sound smooth enough. Everything else is fine.
In the beginning, it builds up, which IMO shouldn't happen. It should be sudden, like NFS Most Wanted. Keep up the good work, and maybe add a few more instruments.
but still needs a lot of work, maybe make the guitar slur into each note, but keep up the good work man, you can only get better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.