Everything before the beat is magnificent. I love eerie industrial music and I'd love to hear more of that from you.
I was loving it up until about 1:00. The beat doesn't do much for me. I don't like the guitar at the end either, and also think it should speed up slower and not as drastically. The opening, however, sounds brilliant. A giant factory slowly creaking to life.
What guitar? All the sounds I used were either metal or industrial type sounds. I have no guitars in the song. =P
Thank you for the review though.
Haha nice xD
Wonderful eerie feeling =]