I love the eerie feeling to this.
But there needs to be more...SOUND/MUSIC
It sounded scary and mysterious until the end. That little girl scream kind ruined it, made it more funny than scary. Anywho, l kinda like the name, 'Steelstalker'.
I dunno, just kinda sounds nifty. But my guess is it's about, i dunno, a STALKER? And at the end he maybe gets caught or kills someone? idk.
Haha, I was trying to figure out how to make it scary while still delivering the message. Perhaps a blood splatter would work better? =P
I guess I'll just have to find out when I edit it.
Almost like a spy-type of song? Maybe a horror song... Anyways, again, you need to add some more noise to it. The noises there are good and all... but maybe a few glass noises, or some metal hitting metal noises. I dunno, just my thoughts. Just keep practicing!
I also thought I needed more sounds, especially something to keep the song moving. However, due to the fact that this was made at 11PM with my mom essentially breathing down my neck, I couldn't find anything appropriate.
I plan on doing a revision of this song, and making it better. Thank you for your input.
By the way, your guess is somewhere in the ballpark, with horror, but not exact. =P