Synths need work...
I recognize the song, but still...The synths need alot of work... for one, the bass, is quite bad, and the main synth is lifeless at best.
Plus, why does it randomly end? This is an EASY song to loop...but that was just bad.
Work on your songs a bit more before submitting them.
Better luck next time.
>< Okay ! Thank you !
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