This was insane. Insanely bad. You need to play around, sure, to get tunes down and stuff. But don't record and POST that! There is no direction, no order, just notes. I don't like it. You have some good tonal things in there, just take those and expand them. But never, ever, EVER do something like this again. For the sake of music.
Dude this was horrible.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.