this could be put in a game
It is good, but very....weak. Everything is on the same level. The bass needs to be a bass drum or kick because you dont get a kick feeling from it. It just sounds like another drum. Also make the guitar louder than the rest of it and maybe make some highlighted notes.
thanks as well, i needed advice form people how to improve this when it was around GCSE times, you would be the 1st person to give constructive critisium (Y) thanks =D.
lolz but ill keep trying to improve it (not for the sake of the GCSE's but for newgrounds).
also take into consideration i know next to nothing about guitars. and im just your average grade 5 drummer.
Reminds me of Duke Nukem. I like it a lot!