This is... not worthy of being called electronic
This seems like it was something copied, and then just thrown together really fast.... the sounds don't mix well together, it's a poor synthesizer being used, and it's all around a bad "electronic" music sound track. If you're going to make something like this, at least fast pace it and make it orginal. Slow techno sounds like shit. It is NOT enjoyable to me, the viewer.
On the other hand
I think you did a good job bro. I don't ever really hearing music like this before, but it ain't bad. Keep practicing man.
Is that ur mom?
I have never heard anything this bad before... Too Many effects and too much of them!
I am sure that you know all about Minimalist or MInimal Styles of music. Cause there were very little effects used. SO my friend think before you speak.