HEY I'm from Roblox BUT THIS IS SO AWESOME
Reviewing as I listen...
I like the panning claps, you don't hear that kind of stuff a lot.
0:17 I'm not a fan of that kind of bassline-ish, kinda too "raw". Some kind of LFO might help maybe Vibrato/Filter-modulation/Tremolo.
0:34 That's a nice Percussion-line, but the new synth has the same issues as the bassline earlier, It's not very interesting.
0:51 Hmm, even though it's the main groove it doesn't really groove. The subbass-synth and the kick don't work together very well. I also prefer a more "off-beaty" bassline, but that might be a matter of taste.
1:25-2:00 That's a fun part, I like the reggae-like feel to this
2:17 The strings are okay, they're doing their job, no more, no less
Another more general thing: You should really turn down the reverb, in such amounts it just distracts from the main thing instead of adding dimension.
It has some nice ideas, but there's still a lot of room for improvement. I hope my suggestions were helpful to you, pm me if you've got any questions.
Really badass man. I really like the bass riff and the synth break at 1:26. :D
man i like this song, i like the panning claps and the bass and the it seems original, great work, made me dance around at 3 in the morning half dead haha
Very long intro for a short song. The bass could have been worked on a little better so it didnt seem like a melody type thing. A deeper more defining type of bass would be better. The melody was nice but it sounded a little familiar. Good work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.