I liked the fact you made the drums sound like live drums with your patterns, it didn't have the typical 4x4 kick or similar pattern, good job on creativeity and programming on this piece, you need to get your hands on better VST's myfreind. Some sounds i didn't like but the programing was good. Not a big fan of the SLAYER guitar ahhaha,.
That's not even the slayer lol. It's a sytrus one, which is slightly better but the tone still pisses me off. I remastered this one recently actually, though there's still a little editing to be done. This was long before I discovered how to mix and master and before I even started diving into the industrial genre. I'm glad you liked it though lol.
I think the synth part at 1:19 might sound better as a slightly heavy guitar with synth backing. Or maybe even wah-wahed or flanged?
Good job writing though. I would enjoy hearing this recorded!
P.S. The guy below me offered to do guitar, if you decide to record this, let me know, I've been drumming for 8 years and I would be happy to record drum parts for you.
5/5 and 9/10
Yeah I agree. That was before I discovered the PWM Saw that FL has which is basically a heavier version of that synth without the phaser effect on it. I was planning on remaking it with bass added as well since there is no bass guitar in this song. Oh you're a drummer? Awesome!! I've actually been drumming for 7 years now, but I don't have my kit with me at the moment, and won't for quite some time. I am going to re-write the song, and hopefully get in touch with the guy below me for the guitar, so if you have your drumkit ready to record when we're done I would be more than happy to colaborate with you. Would you prefer me to send you the file after the guitar has been added? And thanks for reviewing and voting!!! I really appreciate it :D
is that you rewrite it, but only do the parts that aren't guitar, and send me the .mp3 and transcription of the guitar parts, and let me play the guitar parts.
I love this song, and I think it has huge potential, but it needs some real guitar, and maybe better sounding drum samples. With those elements added, this would be an absolute killer.
That said, I understand if you don't want to let me put my grubby paws all over your awesome shit, but I think it would be that much more awesome with real guitar.
That's my opinion, take it or leave it, but this is awesome either way.
Oh damn...really?! O_O Actually that would be great, and I fully agree. The guitar samples on FL sound horrible compared to an actual guitar, and the drum samples sound better once you've learned how to EQ them and change all the pitches of the toms and the snare. Thanks for the review!! And I will most likely be re-writing it soon. I'll get in touch with you when I'm done remaking it, though it may be another week or two before I do.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.