lol dude this sucks
ak to my face ima commit suicide, this song is why so many white folks hate rap. btw dude you should take a little breath when your rappin. OMG the lyrics in this song is hori-fuckin-fyin, get better sound working software to. and the end suck ass to. lol i can't get over this "AK on my BACK!!!" rofl "AK TO MY BRAIN". thats about lol.
thanks yo. why do white people white rap? im white. i dont hate it. this is newgrounds. dont forget that.
The lyrics are good.
Just the beat is so quiet and the hook was.... Not very well to put it nicely.
1 Turn up the beat
_Dark Raven Z_
yay raven! THANKS for the REVIEW and the CRITIQUE!
You actually have some pretty good lyrics at times but the only problem is that you're rushing some of the bars. If it means cutting down some rhymes so it sounds smoother, you should do it. Just work on making your bars smoother instead of rushed. iight my n***a, stay up.
thank you. ill work on that
ok i guess...
good shit wiglet
the quality sounds a lot sharper now, one word of advice is make sure the hook vocals match the rap vocals in volume, other than that, i see major improvements
bobby light gon do you right