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Real Pumping Beat! Sounds maybe more like dance

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Very Good

I thought that at times it seemed like you were still trying to stick to your normal mellow melodic tunes rather than fully go out and do a full fledged trance or dance song. I think that the whole bass too loud/too quiet thing was that parts of the bass were too quiet while others were too loud. It was not really your best at all, but I think that you could really do well in this kind of thing with some more practice. I thought that at times there seemed to be an underlying static sound in the background which I didn't really like so much. It all seemed too low pitched for normal trance stuff. Then again, I am no expert in the making or specifics of electronic music, just a fan, so I may be wrong. Either way, that's my opinion for what it's worth. I gave it a 5.

mjattie responds:

well, I'm not an expert in mixing and I have good melodies becouse I used 1,5 year cakewalk pro audio 9 (which only has MIDI AND THAT SOUNDS AWFUL!!!) So Those 1,5 years I haven't mixed at all, only made melodies, but I'm glad you see potential :)

Oh and the static sound on the background is the echo of the main melody :P I just could not find how to delete it... (I really are that bad with reason :P)

like it =]

catchy and very solid beat, great job man =D

not anything wrong with it as i can hear really =P


Current Score

4.30 / 5.00 (+ 0.024)

great man ^_^


im working on a hard-dance track with some pitched kate lesing vocals =] check my news post ;-)

mjattie responds:

I'll do :)


nice one dude...keep it pumpin bro peace...voted 5

ps.check out my latest tracks

I agree

bass and kick are definitely way too loud in some parts at least. One other thing I noticed around ... 0:55 or so. I'm not a real fan of the pulsing, what is it, static? I realize that its probably just one of your synths, but the point is that it just sounds weird. Other than that, good job, keep up the good work.

mjattie responds:

hmmmm... I haven't heard the kick is too loud...yet... But I don't know what you mean with the pulsing synth, you call static O.o.... I listent to 0:40-0:60 but don't know what you mean... I just don't know what all you guys are saying that the bass is too loud... Can some1 explain why? When I listen to Heaven 3 of Envy, the bass sounds even louder and: no comments with bass is too loud... What did I do wrong 0.o

well..... Tx for reaction though

oh I see a reaction with bass is too loud in envy heaven!!! yay... And, do you think the main synth is too loud, or sharp? Well.... Just don't know what to do XD

no wait it's even worse...
1st one: sais bass needs to be stronger and lead is too spikey or something
2nd: lead is too loud, drums are waaay too quiet... Bass is too weak
4rd: Bass and kick are too loud...


WOOOOOOOO Awesome dood keep it up

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4.50 / 5.00

Aug 5, 2008
12:53 PM EDT
File Info
3.5 MB
2 min 25 sec

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