I thought that at times it seemed like you were still trying to stick to your normal mellow melodic tunes rather than fully go out and do a full fledged trance or dance song. I think that the whole bass too loud/too quiet thing was that parts of the bass were too quiet while others were too loud. It was not really your best at all, but I think that you could really do well in this kind of thing with some more practice. I thought that at times there seemed to be an underlying static sound in the background which I didn't really like so much. It all seemed too low pitched for normal trance stuff. Then again, I am no expert in the making or specifics of electronic music, just a fan, so I may be wrong. Either way, that's my opinion for what it's worth. I gave it a 5.