synths sucks ass
but overall, this song isnt bad, maybe a kick?!, where the hell is the fuckin kick dude, OMG, dance without a kick???!!!
peaceman, not badly done, this song
DjDennC, perhaps a review for me to?
this was a good song, more or less
it was definately upbeat, but not really happy if u asked me haha it seemed kind of like a robotic monotony. I jst decided to go to the WIP thread to post my own song, and I saw ur comment, so here's my constructive crit [posted on the thread]:
my comments: the lead bloopy synth followed a good melody, the off-key notes every now and then were cool. i think it could be better if they had were shaped a little less--like just a straight wave, theres a quality to them that makes it seem not as unfeeling.
the drums could have been better - either a stronger bass drum or a more subdued one would have been better i think, the one u have now seems a little too... presetty? lol. for the hats, try varying the volume, like makign it go from soft to loud on each triplet to make it more dynamic, and the snare sample is just lame--i'd find a completely different sound for it, or just remove it alltogether if it still sounds good.
the backup lead was cliched NG style, but it fit the style of teh song well enough i guess. i think a deep pad would have worked a lot better, but thats jst my opinion. the bassline would have also been better if u can make it lower and deeper. you can try keeping the original sound by layering it with a low sine wave instead of just a sawtooth--i wanna feel my woofers shake more :)
i guess thats all my constructive crit for now, hope i helped!
Great review, one of the best I've received yet! Sorry about the late response, I've been away for 10 days and just came back. Very good crit, I will try to fix everything you said and make it sound better. I'll PM you when it's done and thank you. :) Sorry about the short response after such a big review, I'm actually super tired right now! ;P I'll start working on it tomorrow.
Who knows, maybe someday you'll be making songs for videogames ;)
Gr8 job, it was interesting and a great beat throughout the whole song, and wasent repetative, its very catchy and i love it, gr8 work, keep it up :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.