I can help.
Yes, I have had trouble like this in the past where I uploaded shit and realized it sounded terrible. First, make sure everything matches..The piano and the x=y controller with the other Sytrus you got on there.(I'm assuming you are using Sytrus for the melody).
Second, I do like the fact that the song is constantly changing, and it isn't just one loop used over and over again, which is good. But before you post songs, make sure you ask yourself "If I was a critic, would I like this?" and then my friend, you will know weather to turn this in or not.
Other then those 2 things, I thought this was a good start. Hope to hear some improvement soon :P
Eh its like really bad homie
I dont want to sound like a dick but there is no way in hell this is easy on the ears, i mean Its just Eh really bad, makes me depressed to listen to it, not cus its say cus even if you where mixing and messing with the x=y controller you could have tryed it to sound nice, i mean really man its like a Cracked out ARP mixed in with a sad Piano and it tears me up...
Maybe next time?
There's this thing with me. After I finish a song and upload it I realise that it sounds terrible. Then I can't be bothered removing it so that others don't have to endure the torture of listening to it. I guess it's a bad habit, but wth I still do it.
I'm not sure what you meant, or what even is, "a Cracked out ARP" but I'm guessing that it's not good. The piano is default (lmao) of the 3xOsc if I remember correctly.
Maybe next time...
So, how could I improve? I know what it sounds like, I have ears too you know, I just want to know what I could improve for next time.